Cool wind brushed away Meena’s long brown hair. The
night in the hills is really amazing thought Meena.
Thousands of stars blink down at her. Each shining
brightly unlike the city where stars are smothered with smoke.
The pine’s fragrance is carried on by the wind leaving
the teen thrilled. She closed her eyes and swayed a bit with wind feeling like a
pine tree.
The mountain soil felt soft on her bare feet. The multi-coloured
birds all chirping during the day were now asleep on the treetops. Their tiny
nests nicely camouflaged in the branches.
An old owl was hooting somewhere. Meena eagerly scanned the treetops for a glimpse of it but was unable to locate it.
Everything was perfect. The whole setting was serene.
Meena eyes gleamed as she turned around to absorb it all when her eyes fell on
something ugly.
Mohan, her little brother was standing near a tree
heaving heavily and ruining the quiet atmosphere. His clothes were soiled and spectacles
askew. This clearly displayed how many times he had tripped while following
her.
‘What are you doing here?’, hissed Meena.
Mohan spoke in an injured tone, ‘I should be asking
you that. You left without informing.’
‘I told you I was going for a walk’, hissed back
Meena.
‘Well, I thought I would follow you,’ retorted Mohan.
Meena rolled her eyes, really her brother was a big
scaredy-cat. He couldn’t even stay in a room alone for 15 minutes.
Meena spoke up, ‘You know Mom and dad would be back
from the spa in some time. Why don’t you go back to the room and wait for
them?’
Mohan frowned, ‘You are trying to get rid of me but let me tell you that I am not turning back until you are.’
Meena sighed. Well, here’s an end to a peaceful night
time stroll, she thought. So, she turned away from her brother and started to
move ahead on the trekking trail.
Mohan followed her complaining audibly. The owl
continued to hoot and the two continued walking.
After some time, Mohan stopped weeping instead he
started babbling. He went on to talk about the trees, their properties, the
types of animals found in the hills and so on.
Mohan was great at his research but it was annoying
Meena all the more. Even the owl thought him to be a restless predator and so,
it too left that spot.
Meena was just going to tell him to be quiet. When
Mohan screamed loudly, ‘It’s a new moon night!’
‘Stop shouting idiot. So, what if it was a new moon
night that’s the reason, I am out to enjoy the stars and the peace. So, why
don’t you head back’ added Meena hopefully.
By now Mohan’s eyes were wide with fear and he hushed,
‘Don’t you know that a new moon night and a full moon night are both the
perfect setup for a horror story. It’s the time when ghosts, spirits, vampires
and what not wake up. Also, right now we are all alone on an isolated track. Oh
no! we should really be heading back.’
Meena started to hush him but seeing his pleading eyes
she conceded. ‘Fine we are going back. Anyways, it’s getting late, we should now
be heading back,’ she spoke shrugging her shoulders.
Mohan ran towards and gave her a hug. Well, it always
feels good when your scared brother gives you a hug, thought Meena. Smiling
inwardly, she turned back and started walking towards the hotel.
They have been walking for about 20 minutes now still
Meena was unable to locate the way back. Mohan had again started whimpering. He
cried out, ‘We are lost. Now the monsters will eat us.’
Meena spoke out, ‘It’s fine just calm down. I must
have taken a long turn or something.’
But Mohan kept whining. They turned another turn and a
pale man in black coat appeared.
Both of them screamed. Mohan shouted, ‘A vampire.’
The man affronted spoke up, ‘Well I am sorry to
disappoint you sir but I am not a vampire. I am the hotel’s porter.’
Meena calmed down and blushed at her stupidity. Mohan
was still staring at the man with his mouth hanging open. Meena shook him. They
both apologized for their false accusation.
The porter smiled, ‘Well never mind you both too
freaked me out. Anyways what are you both doing out in the walking trail at
night?’
Meena spoke up,
‘Well we got lost. We were just walking to enjoy the natural beauty.’
The porter gave them a swift a bow and remarked, ‘Hope
you enjoyed the beauty of the hills but madam it would be even prettier during
the day. Also, there would be no vampires to scare you off.’
Meena laughed and even Mohan gave a nervous chuckle.
The porter then offered to guide them back. He was really an amiable person. He
seemed elderly yet his feet were well guided on the hills. In just a matter of
time he had guided them back on the main path.
‘So, here we are back on the path. By the way in which
room, you are staying?’ he asked.
Meena replied that in room number 340.
The porter then spoke up, ‘Oh! You are staying in the
east wing then you shouldn’t have come this far to have a taste of natural
beauty. Why the most beautiful thing is right next to your room.’
Their curiosity was aroused and they followed him with
great excitement. Just near their room the porter beckoned them towards an old
pine tree. He picked a stick from the ground and hit upon several holes and
crevices on the trees. He had performed a magic step which had now released
something really beautiful.
From every crevice and hole came out millions of tiny
fireflies. Each glowing brightly. Meena’s eyes were twinkling in fascination
even Mohan was too stumped to speak.
Meena looked over at the porter he too was smiling at
the fireflies and was going over to wake the others. His batch was glittering.
Mr. Ram Dayal, it said.
So, the porter was Ram Dayal thought Meena. Well, she
made a mental note to remind her parents to say special thanks to him later.
Finally, they returned in their room with wonderful
memories etched in their minds.
‘Anything else you require madam or sir?’, asked the
porter.
Mohan instantly spoke up, ‘Yes please, a glass of
water for me. All this excursion had left me really tired.’
‘Surely sir.’
Meena too piped up, ‘Also Mr. Dayal thank you so much
for today.’
‘My pleasure madam,’ he replied and giving another bow
to both of them he closed the door and left.
Quite a time went by but Mr. Dayal didn’t return.
Their parents too returned from the spa but Mr. Dayal didn’t come with the
water bottle.
‘Why don’t you call the room service, dear,’ Their mom
spoke up. ‘Your porter might have forgotten about it.’
So, Mohan rang up the room service and ordered some
water bottles. They arrived in some time but this time someone else was present
to give them.
Meena too came out with Mohan to collect the bottles.
The new porter spoke, ‘Really sorry for the delay we
didn’t receive your message earlier.’
‘It’s fine, Mr. Dayal must have forgotten about it,’
spoke up Meena.
The new porter looked up at her and replied in
bewilderment, ‘I am sorry ma’am but you couldn’t have possibly met Mr. Ram
Dayal because he passed a week back in the servants quarter.’
Very nice story. A mystery is left in the end for the reader about the Potter's spirit.
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ReplyDeleteU always put it the perfect way!!!
ReplyDeleteTruly magical
ReplyDeleteGreat words
ReplyDeleteWow ! Well portrayed
ReplyDeleteWow ! Well portrayed
ReplyDeleteWow ! Well portrayed
ReplyDeleteVery nice story ifeel proudly keep it up
ReplyDeleteA beautiful piece of extraordinary imagination
ReplyDeleteReally amazing!
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ReplyDeleteNice. The siblings would have been petrified....
ReplyDeleteNice. The siblings would have been petrified....
ReplyDeleteNice. The siblings would have been petrified....
ReplyDeleteShould definitely make a part 2 of the story.
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So profoundly inscribed. Amazing. Tremendous imagination
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